Kristen Corey
Professor Andrea Schwenke Wyile
ENGL 3973 - Children’s Literature
11 November 2009
Forbidden Vegetables or Morning Cake? A Reevaluation of Nutritional Content
> in The Tale of Peter Rabbit and In The Night Kitchen
Beatrix Potter’s The Tale of Peter Rabbit and Maurice Sendak’s In The Night Kitchen are two works that, for rather contrasting reasons, are very well-known examples of children’s literature . Sendak’s In The Night Kitchen—which features illustrations of a fully exposed young boy nearly baked into a cake by three mysterious graveyard-shift chefs— sparked great controversy upon its release, quite unlike Potter’s The Tale of Peter Rabbit, which is often considered a safe story-time staple found on library, classroom, and home bookshelves for children across the continent. While these two picture books seem altogether different, there are in fact some striking similarities. Both Potter and Sendak present boisterous boys as their protagonists, who share a curiosity that takes them away from their safe places and into uncharted settings where they not only explore the environment around them, but also delight in its riches—namely, food, which provides “a means of rebellion and self-empowerment” (Keeling and Pollard 11) . Furthermore, both Peter and Mickey at one point or another manage to lose their clothes, escape becoming something to be eaten amongst an endlessly edible landscape and, finally, arrive in bed by the end of their stories . When each story does end, however, the reader is left with very different feelings and, I would argue, varying levels of satisfaction as well. A comparative analysis of the main characters in these two picturebooks reveals the ways in which Potter and Sendak offer divergent ideals to the children who read their stories and, in turn, challenges the widely-accepted notion of Potter’s Peter Rabbit fulfilling the role of a “moral story,” while highlighting the more positive outcomes of Sendak’s imaginatively eccentric children’s tale .
Both Potter’s Peter Rabbit and Sendak’s Night Kitchen make use of the common home-away-home narrative structure typical of children’s literature. Since Peter and Mickey each venture into unfamiliar territories in their stories, an analysis of these foreign backdrops is a useful starting point. While Mr. McGregor’s forbidden garden provides a starkly different setting than the light of the night kitchen , there are certainly some significant commonalities. One example is the influence of the authors’ personal surroundings on the construction of their respective adventure worlds. Potter’s garden is a place where nature is abundant and its creatures, for the most part, friendly and encouraging. Being a friend to animals and proclaiming a love for the natural world herself, it only makes sense that Potter’s stories would unfold within such a setting (Lear 42 ). In contrast , Sendak’s night kitchen strikingly resembles a city skyline forged from packaged pantry contents, complete with the full moon and a milk-jug skyscraper. This highly industrialized and commercialized fantasy land depiction is undoubtedly inspired by Sendak’s own childhood experience of living in luminous New York City during the 1930s (Lanes 86 ).
Aside from being pleasing to the eye and tantalizing to the tongue, however, both of these environments have their dangers . In Potter’s garden, the main source of threat comes from Mr. McGregor and his disruption of the natural world. While the garden is indeed Mr. McGregor’s property, there remains a prevailing notion that nature does not belong to anyone, but rather, to everyone. From the perspective of Peter and, quite likely, the reader then, Mr. McGregor is, in fact, the character being portrayed as intruder. In addition to the obvious risk of being caught by Mr. McGregor directly, Peter also faces perilous obstacles—including a gate (20) , a gooseberry net (35), and a sieve (39)—all of which have been imposed on nature by this man. --> Considering that Potter was known to be a recluse throughout her lifetime, one may read into the intrusive quality of the dangers presented in Peter Rabbit as echoing her own personal fears and apprehensions (Lane and Potter 201). This perspective subtly laces Potter’s narrative with a notion that associates interface with danger and, in turn, safety with seclusion—a problem that is reinforced through several avenues within the stor y. In Sendak’s story, on the other hand, a place that was, presumably, once Mickey’s usual kitchen has been transformed and taken over by three mysterious chefs, though these trespassers are depicted quite differently from Mr. McGregor. The only hazard that Mickey faces is when he falls into a pan of batter and the chefs unknowingly mix him in with the morning cake. This act is quite clearly accidental, as the illustrations show the three chefs working away merrily with closed eyes (4) which do not open until later when Mickey fortunately escapes the cake before it is fully baked (6).[1] Because the chefs seem to be oblivious to their misplaced ingredient, the sense of danger is very different here—it is rooted in ignorance, as opposed to intrusion. As with Potter’s writing, this aspect of the story may be attributed to Sendak’s own fears. As a child, Sendak notes that he fell ill quite often and, as a result, was confined to his bed—a form of seclusion that was perceived as stifling, rather than safe (.Sonheim ). In his childhood, Sendak exercised his imagination to compensate for the boundaries imposed by his bedroom, and, similarly, his story perpetuates a more imaginative and outgoing ideal than Potter’s. Certainly, Potter also explores this to an extent, as Peter is quite outgoing when he runs “straight away to Mr. McGregor’s garden” (19); however, his decision to do so is shown in a much more negative light, as the narrative describes him as being “very naughty” (19) and culminates in an overall unpleasant experience for which he is punished. Mickey, on the other hand, is challenged to defeat the danger of being ignored, and is supported in his creative and audacious tendencies, which do not let him go unnoticed(*) .
Another intriguing connection between Peter and Mickey is the representation of their clothing, and loss thereof which they each experience. The absence of Mickey’s clothing during a significant portion of Sendak’s In The Night Kitchen has been controversial for some time—so much so that there have been reported instances of librarians sketching diapers onto Sendak’s illustrations of the naked Mickey before allowing them on their bookshelves (West 125-26). While it is easy to read into the potentially inappropriate aspect of this creative decision , a closer reading may reveal the symbolic value of Mickey’s freedom from his pajamas. That is to say, the clothing in both Peter Rabbit and In The Night Kitchen is representative of a constraint placed on the protagonists. This can be captured in a simple comparison of illustrations from the two books—contrasting the image of a valiant and proud fully-exposed Mickey (16-v) with an awkward and rigidly confined depiction of Peter as his mother fastens his jacket for him (12). Peter’s clothes not only restrict him on a social level,[2] but also, and more prominently, on a practical level. When Peter encounters Mr. McGregor, it is only after losing both of his shoes that he is able to run on all fours, fast enough to temporarily escape Mr. McGregor’s view (35). Clearly, the clothing that his mother dresses him in inhibits Peter from his natural instincts; Mickey, on the other hand, is freed from such inhibitions when he falls out of his clothes and explores his imagination—an equally natural instinct for children to channel. I would argue that removing Mickey’s garments is Sendak’s way of encouraging readers to activate their own imaginations and open up to the simple delights of literature, instead of inhibiting their reading experience with analytic lenses and trivial social concerns .[3] Furthermore, Peter’s clothing later becomes additionally problematic by actually putting him in danger, when he gets “caught [in a gooseberry net] by the large buttons on his jacket” (35). Luckily, he escapes, but there is no doubt that his mother will be cross with him for losing his distinguished, and “quite new,” attire (35). It is ironic that the very clothing that constrained Peter, and almost consigned him to the McGregors’ keeping for good, is later used for a scarecrow, acting to keep the other animals out of the garden—a warning for those creatures who otherwise exist freely unclothed in their natural environment . As with the earlier mentioned facts about the impact of Potter’s and Sendak’s personal experiences on their stories, the ideas represented through clothing in both of these examples are also congruent with the respective authors’ backgrounds. Potter’s properly-clad Peter signifies an element of confinement that can be added to the previously discussed concept of “safe” seclusion—despite the fact that Peter’s clothes actually trouble him a great deal within the story. In opposition, Sendak’s Mickey of the nudist predilection stands for a freedom of imagination and the courage to boldly step outside of pre-governed societal boundaries , which seems to be just what Sendak has done with his notorious Night Kitchen illustrations.
The Tale of Peter Rabbit and In The Night Kitchen are both brought full-circle as they conclude when the main character is put to bed. These final images, though similar in nature, evoke very different emotions in the two stories. After falling back into his bed, Mickey is magically returned to his cozy, clothed, “cakefree” state and Sendak’s illustrations convey a comforting sense of contentedness over his successful achievement (18-r). Peter’s bedtime, however, is accompanied by a sick stomach and an unpleasant dose of camomile tea from his mother. Potter’s final rendering of her main character (66) shows him tucked away into bed at the far end of the rabbit-hole while his sisters sit by the fire with his mother. Here, Peter is both literally and figuratively secluded from his family and confined to his bed. It may seem unjust to display Potter’s ending in a negative light such as this, since Peter did disobey his mother and the consequences he pays are directly caused by his own actions. After all, Mickey’s adventure was quite evidently the product of his imagination or a dream of some sort, and therefore his story requires no conclusive moral and can enjoy its happy ending. Regardless of these truths, however, the audience of the literature must be taken into consideration. There is no question that young readers will be sensitive to the underlying emotions and ideals presented by each of these stories. They do not need to analyze elements of the books neither to understand that Peter is being punished for his adventure and empathize with him for feeling excluded by his family, nor to perceive Mickey as a hero in his story who freely uses his own devices to save the day and make it safely back home. I would argue, though, that children are less likely to initially grasp the more pragmatic differences between the two journeys presented in these books, especially considering that Mickey’s more fantastical adventure requires a higher level of abstract thinking in order to be conceptualized as such. Developmentally then, children are more likely to assimilate the values woven into the narrative of a given book before displaying full comprehension of some of the more complex details of the story. It is for this reason that authors of children’s books are left with the large responsibility of feeding children with literature that is both worthy of and beneficial for consumption .
In keeping with the food metaphor of children being consumers of picturebook literature, a similar analogy can be made to deduce the ways in which Potter and Sendak are feeding children, by examining the actual depiction of food in each book. Peter Rabbit features “lettuces…French beans; and…some radishes” (23) as well as a supper of “bread and milk and blackberries” (68) for Flopsy, Mopsy, and Cotton-tail. This overall nutritious platter of fresh fruit and vegetables parallels the common notion that The Tale of Peter Rabbit is a prime example of wholesome literature for young readers, and this bite-sized book itself is just the right fit for “little hands” (Linder and Potter 95). Conversely, Sendak’s In The Night Kitchen serves up several processed and prepackaged ingredients, such as salt, baking soda, jam, condensed food, yeast, shortening, sugar and, of course, morning cake. The delectable delineation of having “cake every morning” (18-v) is possibly enough for some critics to align In The Night Kitchen with Marilyn Kaye’s model of “twinkie books—” the fast-food equivalent of literature which “can be read quickly and require minimal mental effort…there is no need to read between the lines, or analyze, or even concentrate” (qtd. in Wyile and Rosenberg 1). Through my own close readings of both Peter Rabbit and In The Night Kitchen, I would find it extremely problematic to deem either of these delightful children’s stories as belonging to a class of “twinkie” literature, considering the layers of meaning and level of thought they each stimulate. As mentioned in my introductory comments, however, I do have slight reservations about maintaining Beatrix Potter’s The Tale of Peter Rabbit as a quintessential moral story for young readers. Although the core values portrayed in Potter’s story are indeed important ones—and one would be delusional to suggest that children should outright defy their parents’ wishes for the sake of adventure, as Peter does—it seems as though the avenue through which they are conveyed here is, perhaps, not the most effective. At the risk of exhausting my metaphor I will propose that, while Potter has respectable intentions, the narrative of Peter Rabbit seems to, in a way, force-feed these ideas to children who may, much like Peter himself, be left dissatisfied or even sickened upon digesting the contents of this story. On the contrary, Sendak’s approach offers more of an “everything in moderation” mantra. Mickey does not once indulge in the appetizing landscape which surrounds him and therefore is left free of the tummy-ache that Peter undoubtedly experiences; similarly, Sendak offers his readers a tempting smorgasbord of imaginative opportunity, but does not encourage them to binge on such ideals to the point of disconnecting from reality.
To conclude, I will further support my arguments by examining the final images that each of these two picturebooks leave with the reader. As discussed earlier, Potter’s penultimate illustration in Peter Rabbit pushes Peter, both figuratively and visually, to the margins of his own home, barely visible from his bed in the background. Indeed, the final page-turn of the book evidently removes Peter from the story entirely. While the intention is likely to reinforce the moral of this story by shifting the focus to the well-behaved triplets, I contend that ending the story on this note conveys a much stronger message about Peter’s punishment—he is left lonely, alienated, and even forgotten. This builds upon the earlier established notions of seclusion and confinement, and ultimately perpetuates a damaging set of binary oppositions wherein a child has the choice to either conform or rebel, remain solitary or experience invasion, or—the most potent of all—is either good or bad. The obvious dangers embedded in such social constructs lies in the nonexistence of any middle ground within which children may explore, grow, learn lessons, and construct their own morals. I believe that Maurice Sendak’s Mickey of the Night Kitchen boldly bridges the gap between such oppositions, making this middle ground his play-place. This is echoed in Mickey’s free flux between reality and fantasy, as well as dress and bareness. Just when the story seems to finish, Sendak’s final page-turn reveals one last glorious portrayal of the heroic Mickey, who is duly thanked for rediscovering imagination, defeating social confinement, opening the eyes and mind of the reader and, of course, saving the morning cake. In this reevaluation of two highly noted examples of children’s literature, I applaud Sendak for his daring and delicious upset of the picturebook ideal. Further, it is my hope that adult critics of this literature are motivated to open up their palates to the world of flavors available, for the benefit of the children who, otherwise, may only experience that which is put onto their literary plates. There is no question that my own children will find Beatrix Potter’s The Tale of Peter Rabbit on their bookshelves someday, just a bunny-hop away from Maurice Sendak’s In The Night Kitchen.
Works Cited
Dorbin , Sidney I. and Kenneth B Kidd, eds. Wild Things: Children’s Culture and Ecocriticism. Michigan, Wayne State University Press , 2004. (*)Print.
Flanagan, Victoria. Into The Closet: Cross-Dressing and The Gendered Body in Children’s Literature and Film. California : Routledge, 2008. Print.
Lane, Margaret and Beatrix Potter. The magic years of Beatrix Potter. Michigan : Warne, 1978. Print.
Lanes, Selma G. Through the Looking Glass: Further Adventures and Misadventures in the Realm of Literature. Massachusetts: David R. Godine Publishers, 2006. Print.
Lear, Linda J. Beatrix Potter: a life in nature . Michigan: Allen Lane, 2007. Print.
Linder, Leslie and Beatrix Potter. A history of the writings of Beatrix Potter, including unpublished work . USA : Warne, 1971. Print.
Keeling, Kara K. and Scott T. Pollard, eds. Food In Children’s Literature: Critical Approaches. New York: Routledge, 2009. Print.
Potter, Beatrix. The Tale of Peter Rabbit. USA : Frederick Warne, 2002. Print.
Sendak, Maurice. In The Night Kitchen . USA: HarperCollins, 1995. Print.
Sonheim, Amy. Maurice Sendak. Michigan : Twayne, 1991. Print.
West, Mark I. Trust your children: voices against censorship in children’s literature . New York: Neal-Shuman Publishers, 1997. Print.
Wyile, Andrea Schwenke and Teya Rosenberg, eds. Considering Children’s Literature: A Reader. Ontario: Broadview, 2008. Print.
[1] As no numeric symbols denote the pages in Sendak’s In The Night Kitchen, the number system I will use will refer to page-openings, beginning after the dedication page. Therefore, 4 and 6 refer to the fourth and sixth double page-spreads following the dedication page; when either the verso or recto page is being referred to exclusively, I will indicate this with the appropriate letter following the page number (i.e. 16-v, 8-r).
[2] A feminist reading of this picture-book could certainly lend itself to an analysis of the gendered nature of the bunnies’ clothing; however, that is sadly another issue altogether to which I would need to devote a separate essay.
[3] I realize the slight hypocrisy of this statement, as I am, no doubt, filtering my own reading through some combination of critical lenses. Nonetheless, I feel that my arguments promote more open-minded and socially conscious values, rather than inhibitory, closed-minded ones.
Correct formatting of name course & date.
Informative and interesting title offers clever and intriguing question and commentary and identifies texts to be discussed.
Proper MLA formatting of title: it is centered and double-spaced; book titles are italicized.
Good introduction sentence. Names authors and titles of works to be discussed.
note the effective use of dashes to offset the parenthetical comment.
identifies main focus of essay by outlining common ground of the two works.
although the writer names the protagonists of the two stories here all characters (and critics) should be introduced upon first mention. One solution here is to say “both protagonists Potter’s Peter and Sendak’s Mickey”
good use of parallel structure. It is advisable though optional to use a comma to offset the final item in the series for the sake of clarity (after landscape).
It is permissible to use first person in an academic essay. However to play it safe you should check with your instructor to determine her or his preference. Also keep in mind that “I” should be used advisedly as it can otherwise weaken your argument.
A clear and effective thesis statement. Note that it avoids anticipatory description (I will discuss a b c) yet conveys that information implicitly. The thesis statement provides a main claim (divergent ideals of the stories challenge typical assumptions regarding morality in children’s literature) and an outline of key body points (ideals morality unexpected positive outcomes).
The umbrella topic sentence for this integrated comparison essay announces the first body point by making a statement regarding both works.
Identifies settings to be compared - the topic of this paragraph
Ideally the source for the idea in the previous sentence would be introduced at the beginning of the paraphrase/summary/quotation. Example: “As Linda Lear notes being a friend…” One needs to be particularly mindful of paraphrases and summaries as a signal phrase is the only means of identifying where the borrowed ideas begin
Good use of transition
Same comment as for previous scholarly reference (see Lear above)
good transition from previous paragraph that also announces the topic of this paragraph.
the first citation for a primary text should include the author’s last name (Potter 20). It is not needed thereafter so long as the reference is clear.
note the use of punctuation and the integration of textual evidence.
The demonstrative pronoun “this” must refer to something; thus “this perspective subtly laces” rather than “this subtly laces.”
Here the register is a bit jolting/unclear. The word choice (interface) could be reconsidered and/or the sentence reworked.
Good transition in the discussion from one text to the next
Here again the first citation for this primary text should include the author’s last name: (Sendak 4).
In MLA style footnotes (or endnotes) are used to make comments that are additions or asides to the main argument. In other words comments that would disrupt the flow of your discussion in the body of your essay. GABRIEL Note re “Numeric symbols denote the pages”
This is a somewhat complicated way of stating that there is no pagination. Nevertheless this lack of page numbers is common in picturebooks and this note clearly spells out how the writer accommodates this fact in her documentation.
Missing Page Reference
Here we don’t know what “this” refers to. “this ideal” would work or “Peter’s (adventurous) boundary breaking” .
good example of proper use of semi-colon and comma with adverb to connect independent clauses.
missing word/subject; should read “and it culminates”
good example of thought explication and detail including the use of four integrated quotations and commentary.
This topic was anticipated in the introduction
Need a comma before which
Here it might be better to specify whose creative decision is being discussed: “the librarians’ creative decision/imposition”
Use of figurative language to discuss literary elements and meaning.
Subject-Verb agreement error. Should be "are".
Should specifiy what "this" refers to: "This constraint"
Note recognizes related topics of interest while maintaining the focus of the essay topic
Convincing example/application of knowledge and understanding
Essay writer's self-reflexive comment further underscores comment made in body of the essay.
Effective identification of rhetorical device
Good example of explication and detail
As the use of “impact” as a verb makes many language sticklers cringe it is worth considering alternative formulations as the writer has done here. Compare the effectiveness of this revision to the alternative in an earlier draft: “To refer back to the earlier mentioned facts about Potter’s and Sendak’s personal experiences impacting their stories…”
Good example of knowledge and understanding. The writer could have taken this a step further by emphasizing the nature of each author’s background. Peter is “properly clad” by Victorian standards and Mickey’s “nudist predilections” suit the many cultural revolutions preceding its 1970 publication date.
The clear but broad topic sentence is supplemented by the next sentence which narrows the focus
The use of the double negative (do not need neither nor) might cause some confusion. The removal of the word “neither” would eliminate this problem.
Use of metaphor follows through on essay title reference to food in the introduction and also connects the theme of food in both books to its analysis in the essay providing a transition to the final point.
Omit comma as this is a restricve phrase
Reverse the order of the dash and the quotation mark. Normally unless you are citing a page number punctuation marks are placed inside the quotation marks but in this case the rhetorical effect of the reverse is more effective.
Good use of ellipsis to signal omission of part of the sentence. There should however be a space before and after a three point ellipsis (whereas there is no space before the first dot in a four point ellipsis which is used to signal that the elision goes beyond the end of the original sentence).
Note method of dealing with a quotation cited wtihin a secondary source.
Self-reflexive and sophisticated engagement with literary meaning and context.
Literary and rhetorical element of the picturebook
Conclusion goes beyond a simple restatement of the ideas set out earlier
Once again playing with the governing food metaphor this point demonstrates insight into the subtleties of the text and the relevance of the essay’s analysis.
The closing sentence playfully wraps up the discussion and looks outward from the immediate analysis to further application of these ideas.
Correct formatting of Works Cited title and of entries. Note that everything is double-spaced and the hanging indentations allow the alphabetized list of last names to stand out.
Spelling error: Dobrin
MLA uses the abbreviation UP for University Press (and P for Press in other names such as Gaspereau P). This entry should read: Wayne State UP
Missing the city of publication. New York: Routledge
Unlike some other systems MLA capitalizes all words in titles except articles (a an the) conjunctions (and but or …) and the preposition “to” unless any of these are the first word. The title should also be followed by a period. The correct version for this entry is: The Magic Years of Beatrix Potter. Note also that book and journal titles should be italicized
the city of publication must be provided not the country or province/state. If the location of the city is not self-evident (such as London New York Toronto) follow the city name with the abbreviation for the province/state. If there is no city listed in your book (a recent phenomenon) try to find it on the internet or ask your professor/librarian for help.
Missing the city of publication
Incorrect Capitalization
Missing the city of publication
Incorrect Capitalization
The city of publication must be provided not the country or province/state
Incorrect capitalization. Correction: Food in Children's Literature...
Missing city of publication
Incorrect capitalization: "In the Night Kitchen"
Missing city of publication: New York: Harper Collins
Missing city of publication
Incorrect Capitoliziation.
Missing city of publication. Correction: Peterborough ON: Broadview